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The Jewellery Room — Internal Reference

The Voice Guide

Every word that must not appear on our platforms, and the right alternative. Drawn from the Design Principles, Draft v2. Rows marked added are editorial additions not explicit in the document but consistent with its direction.

0A point of view, not a place
1Be the room designers choose
2Show the hand, not the algorithm
3Prove it before you claim it
4The threshold matters most
5Mobile discovers, desktop decides
6Restraint in guidance, not inventory
7Write like an editor, not a retailer
Banned - never use
Approved - use this instead
Editorial addition - consistent with the principles
Source principle
01

Navigation and sorting labels

BannedUse insteadSource
BestsellersEditor's selectionAlways the first/default sort on every category page. Never an algorithm.Principle 6
TrendingWhat we're wearing now — or named: "Selected by Pernille"Any framing must show a human decision, never a platform signal.Principle 2
New ArrivalsWhat just came inPrinciple 7
SaleAn introductionFirst-purchase 10% only. Never a recurring layer. Never a permanent nav item.Principles 6, 7
Engagement Rings (mega-category)Reached through an editorial path onlyNot a top-level navigation entry. Signals mass market on arrival.Principle 4
All [category] — as a default viewe.g. "All 1,133 hoops" as a homepage entryReachable, but only through an editorial pathNever an undifferentiated wall. Category pages open with an intro first.Principle 6
Price: low to high (as default sort)Editor's selection (always first)Price sorts are secondary options only, never the default.Principle 6
Shop All / All ProductsaddedNot used as a primary entry pointA warehouse floor entry point contradicts the guided-walk principle.Principle 6
CollectionsaddedEdits — or named by theme: "The Summer Edit," "What Charlotte wore in Paris""Collections" is neutral marketplace language. "Edits" implies curation and judgment.Principles 2, 7
02

Product page widgets and recommendation patterns

BannedUse insteadSource
Frequently bought togetherRemove entirely. Curator's note on every product instead.2-3 sentences, in a real voice. This replaces all algorithmic cross-selling.Principle 2
Customers also viewed / People also likedNamed editorial recommendation onlye.g. "Pernille also loves" or "From the same edit" — never algorithm-driven.Principle 2
12 people are viewing thisRemove entirely. No urgency widgets of any kind.Principle 6
Only 2 left in stock!Remove entirelyAbundance handled with calm, not pressure. If stock is relevant, mention it plainly in logistics.Principle 6
Countdown timer / Urgency clockRemove entirelyPrinciple 6
Add to Bag (as primary CTA on mobile)Save to The Room (primary) — Add to Bag (secondary)Mobile is discovery, not conversion. The save action reflects that intent.Principle 5
Add to WishlistSave to The RoomProprietary language tied to the Room concept. Not a generic marketplace feature.Principle 5
You might also likeaddedRemove or replace with named human curation onlySame logic as "Customers also viewed." Algorithmic phrasing breaks the curation promise.Principle 2
Quick Buy / Quick AddaddedRemove from grid viewsOptimises for transaction speed. TJR optimises for consideration. The piece deserves its own page.Principles 4, 6
Free shipping on orders over [amount]addedState shipping plainly in logistics accordionsProgress-bar shipping incentives are urgency mechanics. Logistics collapse below the editorial content.Principle 4
03

Homepage and first-impression surfaces

BannedUse insteadSource
Product tiles above the foldBrand promise + founders + showroom above the foldNine product tiles on arrival signals mass market. The threshold is the point.Principle 4
Promotional hero / discount hero bannerThreshold statement: what the Room is, in plain language, then a way inPrinciple 4
Bestsellers (homepage section)A named edit with a reason: "What Charlotte wore this month"Principles 2, 6
Newsletter pop-up on arrivaladdedRemove. Introduce via The Edit, not a pop-up.Pop-ups are explicitly banned (Principle 6). The first impression is the brand, not a capture mechanic.Principle 6
Cookie/consent pop-up styled as a brand momentaddedPlain, minimal, legally compliant. Not a brand surface.Restrained handling of mandatory UI reflects the same principle as everywhere else.Principle 0
04

Copywriting vocabulary — banned words

Replace each with something specific to the piece or designer
Banned word or phraseUse insteadSource
Curated / carefully selected / expertly curatedSay who chose it and why. Evidence must follow immediately."Carefully selected" with no proof is an empty adjective.Principles 3, 7
Handpicked / lovingly chosenNamed framing with a reasone.g. "Charlotte chose this after meeting Nina at Inhorgenta, Munich."Principle 7
TimelessSomething specific: the material, the form, the story behind itPrinciple 7
ElegantSomething specific to the piecePrinciple 7
ExquisiteSomething specific to the piecePrinciple 7
StunningSomething specific to the piecePrinciple 7
Must-haveSomething specific to the piecePrinciple 7
IconicSomething specific to the piece or designerPrinciple 7
Statement (as in "statement piece")Something specific to the piecePrinciple 7
Discover / Explore / ExperienceActive, direct: "See," "Read," "Find" — or no verb at allPrinciple 7
LuxuryaddedNever used as self-descriptionRestraint is the luxury signal. The word itself is the opposite of restraint. Let the product and voice do the work.Principle 0
Exclusive / limited editionaddedState the fact plainly if true: "Made in a run of 12" or "Nina's only stockist in Scandinavia"Scarcity language is an urgency mechanic. Plain facts are more credible.Principles 3, 6
Perfect giftaddedName the occasion or the person plainly, or let the editorial do itGift-guide language is retail shorthand. The Room gives considered reasons, not category labels.Principle 7
Investment pieceaddedSay what makes it worth keepingFinancial framing is a mass-market justification device. TJR trusts the work to speak.Principles 0, 7
05

Trust signals and credentials

BannedUse insteadSource
Brand story language for founder credentials"Two sisters with a passion for..."CV-style: specific titles, institutions, datesCharlotte's editorial titles still to confirm. Credentials read like a CV, not a brand narrative.Principle 3
"Carefully selected" without evidencePublish the Room Standard + name a rejection rateCheckable signals only. "We declined 78% of applications this year" beats any adjective.Principle 3
Trust badges as decorationGeneric "Secure checkout" / "Trusted by thousands" bannersPersistent trust block: Bredgade 35 with map, founders named, phone answered by a humanReal-world proof, not badges. Physical address and a real phone number.Principle 3
Reviews / star ratingsaddedNot the primary trust signalRatings are a marketplace convention. TJR's trust is built by the curator's note, the Room Standard, and the named founders. If reviews are used, they are editorial, not aggregated stars.Principles 2, 3
"As seen in" press logos as a banneraddedName the coverage in context, editoriallyA row of logo marks is a credibility shortcut. The Room earns trust through its own voice.Principle 3
06

Mobile experience and notifications

BannedUse insteadSource
Promotional push notifications"20% off today only!" / "Don't miss out!"Personal, not promotional"Pernille added three pieces to The Edit." Notifications are about the Room, not urgency.Principle 5
Grid layout on mobile (default)Vertical, edge-to-edge, one piece per screenMagazine-style. Full-bleed worn photography. Curator's note as headline, price small.Principle 5
App install banner on mobile webaddedRemoveAn install prompt is an interruption. The mobile experience must earn engagement on its own terms.Principle 4
07

Content naming and editorial conventions

BannedUse insteadSource
BlogThe EditTreated as a publication: issues, a named editor, recurring columns, strong opinions.Principle 7
Collections (as a content label)Edits — named by theme or person"The Summer Edit." "What Charlotte wore." Never a neutral catalogue term.Principles 2, 7
Product description (as a label or concept)Written, with an opinionSpecifications collapse below. The writing leads. Not a spec sheet.Principle 7
Featured / Spotlight (algorithmic framing)Named by the person who chose it"Selected by Charlotte" / "What we're thinking about this week"Principle 2
Meet the designer (generic template label)A real profile: magazine-feature formatWhere they trained, what they're known for, what we saw in them, how we found them.Principle 1
Gift GuideaddedA named edit for an occasion: "What we'd give someone who already has everything""Gift guide" is a retail content category. TJR's version has a named editor and a point of view.Principles 2, 7
LookbookaddedAn issue of The Edit, with worn photography and a named editor"Lookbook" is visual catalogue language. An issue has a point of view.Principles 5, 7
08

Customer account and CRM language

Additions — not in the document but consistent with the principles
BannedUse insteadSource
Loyalty Points / RewardsaddedRemovePoints programmes are mass-market retention mechanics. TJR's loyalty is earned by the experience, not gamified.Principle 0
We miss you! (re-engagement email subject)addedAn editorial reason to return: "What just came in" or "Pernille's new edit"Emotional manipulation language. The Room earns the return visit, not prompts it.Principle 7
Your cart is waiting! / You left something behindaddedRemove, or send a considered note about the pieceAbandoned cart prompts are pressure mechanics. If anything, note the piece editorially, not transactionally.Principles 6, 7
Order Confirmation (email subject)addedNamed, personal: "Your piece from [designer] is on its way"Transactional language misses the brand moment. Every customer touchpoint is an editorial surface.Principle 4
My AccountaddedYour RoomConsistent with "Save to The Room," "Compare in your Room." The account is the Room, not an admin panel.Principle 5
WishlistaddedYour Room / The RoomAlready established in Principle 5. A Wishlist is a generic e-commerce feature. "Your Room" is proprietary.Principle 5